Raethiana: The Succubus Who Sucked Me In

Overall: ★★★★★ (4.75 Stars)

Raethiana Can be Purchased at Amazon

I love anything paranormal or fantasy with an action plot. This one covers both the sexy aspects and the action! John Dylena's Portrayl of "John" as he went from, well, kind of a loser, to a "man" of action was extraordinary. I'm usually not a fan of the male driven voice in erotica, but this is really well done and it includes quite a bit of female perspective as well.

The novelization of the "Raethiana Trilogy", Raethiana contains all three books (The Demon at my Door, The Demon in my Heart, & The Demon in my Soul) in addition to a foreword written by the books editor: Nora Nix.
A shy and introverted young man, John is shocked when he manages to leave a bar with the most beautiful woman he's ever seen. It's a dream come true... until they get back to his apartment and he discovers that the woman is a succubus, and he's her next meal.
When John survives the sensual ritual meant to sate the demon's supernatural appetite, she decides not only to stay the night, but to move in as his new roommate and introduce him to her world; a realm full of demons, magic, and a discovery that will change his life forever.

For adults only! Contains the following themes: demons, magic, transformation, gender change, lesbian sex, straight straight sex, orgy, domination, submission
60,000 words

Originality: ★★★★★

I never considered a succubus that can't suck the soul out of someone. I never thought about one who came to live with you, regardless of your desires. And I certainly didn't think of all the adventures these two had together. I think it is original, well written, and full of new ideas. The world building alone was well done enough to give it five stars (in my book).

Character Development/Plot: ★★★★☆

John's character John is developed really well, multifaceted and believable. As he changes and throughout the novel/series I find myself rooting for him. Hoping that he can come to terms with who he really is, and that the two interests will get together in the end.

My only complaint is that I feel some of the development is a bit rushed. I want more back story on the conflict of the major action plot. I want to see the ways in which the rebellion affects the world. I want to know more about Raethiana's history. I want to know more about her slave, about what drives her. About why she exists the way she is. It is because I want to know more about these things I think Dylena should write a sequel! I really loved the book.

Appearance and Editing:★★★★★

Professional and well done. I love the cover and I think the writing is suburb. 

The Romance/The Sex: ★★★★★

7.99 is completely worth it for the level of kinky gender bending and gender swapping sex in this story. I was hot under the collar the whole time I was reading this. I wanted to read this for the sex, to be quite honest, but I stayed with it for the romance, which had me turning page after page. 

Veronica Hardy is a professional editor and author who enjoys writing reviews in her spare time, for fun. She is not compensated by authors, publishers or online retail markets for her opinions. If you are interested in a book review or editing services please email her at Veronica.R.Hardy@gmail.com.

Plus Size Fiction: This Month In BBW Romance/Erotica

The Month of September was an awesome time for BBW Literature. So many new titles graced the stage that I wanted to take the time to highlight a few. Have a gander at some of the titles out there, available to you.

Title: Cured by a Werewolf Psychiatrist (Curvy BBW Paranormal Romance, Shifter Wolf, Alpha Mate)

Author: Larissa Coltrane

Link/s: Amazon[1] B&N[2]

Length:6100

Genre: BBW Paranormal Erotic Romance

Genders:M&F

Blurb:

'A short love story about a broken-hearted woman and a psychiatrist with an unexpected cure.'

Pauline Rheinlander's heart is broken after she found out that her fiancé was cheating on her, and besides sinking deeper into depression she is haunted by strange hallucinations. Her friend Julia recommends her to a psychiatrist who can help her to find a way out.

After her first meeting with the handsome psychiatrist, she tells Julia that he is too attractive for her to continue with the therapy. Simply put, she wouldn't be able to work with someone who had become the object of her sexual desire.

She goes back for a second session to tell him that she has to cancel the therapy, but the handsome psychiatrist has different plans for her.

Kinks: BBW, Werewolf Shifter

Title: Billionaire Astray (BBW erotic romance)

Author: Alice May Ball
Link(s): http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00ELXZVMO

Genders: M/F

Genre: Contemporary Romance
Length: 23 Pages - 6k words 

Blurb: My billionaire was in for a treat, when he discovered the tricks his little downtown diner waitress had learned, just to surprise him. OK, I’m not so little on the outside, and that’s how he likes me.
Only it looked like a couple of minxes were planning to squirm into the Park Avenue suite before I got there.
My life would never be the same again.

Kinks: Billionare, BBW

Title: Choosing Chase - an Old Enough To Love You novella
Author: Julie Raust
Link/s: 
Goodreads - http://www.goodreads.com/book/show/18332637-choosing-chase
Length: 45 pages - 12k words
Genre: Contemporary Erotic Romance
Genders: m/f
Blurb: Just when Tess is resigned to her nonexistent sex life, her hunky young landlord / best friend makes his interest known. Will Tess risk their friendship for one night of passion? Chase is in love with Tess, but he's stuck in the friend zone. When he stumbles upon a chance to get her in his bed he takes it - knowing that he'll only have one night to win her heart for a lifetime.
Kinks: older woman / younger man

Title: My Rockstar's Rhythm of Lust (BBW Erotic Romance)

Author: Alice May Ball
Link(s): http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00EXS2B5C
Genders: M/F
Genre: Contemporary Romance
Lnegth: 23 Pages - 6k words
Blurb: School’s out and big, beautiful Lucy and the other teachers are out to mark the occasion. Into the club swaggers Blaze, a notorious Rockstar, huge in every way, to sweep Lucy away for the ride of her life.
Kinks: Public Sex

Title: Mia's Milk Machine

Author: Nora Nix

Link/s: Amazon, Smashwords, Barnes & Noble

Length: 8,500 words

Genre: Erotic Short

Genders: M/F

Blurb: Dominick is a mechanic hit hard by the failing economy. Mia is the woman whose car breaks down on the highway, and for whom he just happens to stop. An unexpected service call three days later leads him to her ice cream parlor, where she lets him in on her dirty little back room secret; the one her special patrons pay top dollar for. Unfortunately, the machine she uses to manufacture her VIP product has broken down, and she needs someone discreet to take the job. Just how will Mia convince him to keep his silence? Chances are, she'll do just about anything.

Kinks: BBW, Lactation

Title: Riveted: For Love of A Soldier

Author: Veronica Hardy

Link/s: http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00FI3APJU

ASIN: B00FI3APJU

Length: 12,000 Words

Genre: Historical Erotic Romance

Genders: M/F

Blurb: This love can’t be manufactured. Ava is a feisty Riveter who wants nothing more than to help the war effort during The Second Great War. This spunky woman helps build bombers so that the men can get an advantage over the Germans and bring home victory. She didn’t ask for more, until Angelo walked into the factory and into her life. Caught up this soldier’s love, she would do anything he asked her to. Even abandon all she has ever known. Will this industrial strength love meet up to the standards of time?

Kinks: BBW

Title: A Wolf In Heat

Author: Kelly Halstrom

Link/s: http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00FK88XF6/ref=tsm_1_fb_lk

Length: 3400+ words

Genre: Werewolf/Paranormal

Genders: MF

Blurb: Kristy is about to kick off a weekend of relaxation with some trashy tv when an unexpected visitor breaks into her home. What she doesn't know is that mating season has started, and one mysterious werewolf has picked her to give him an heir. He's in heat and he needs her body to quench his flames. How will Kristy deal with the intense lust of breeding and its consequences?

Warning: This 3400+ word story contains dubcon, rough breeding sex and one BBW who finds out that not only are humans not at the top of the food chain, but that they are hot, wet prey for the wolves that are.

Kinks: Rough and Reluctant Breeding

Title: Heating up Jack Frost: A BBW Holiday

Author: Ellen Dominick

Link/s: http://www.amazon.com/Heating-Jack-Frost-Holiday-ebook/dp/B00F99ULMO/[1]

Length: 2600

Genre: Holiday Paranormal Romance

Genders: M/F

Blurb: Curvy Holly just wants to go home for the holidays. She'd rather be warm with her family than at home without a guy to heat her up. But when a freak snow storm crashes her car and strands her in the middle of nowhere, those plans are ruined. Lucky for her, she's saved by a mysterious, tall, pale, and sizzlingly sexy guy named Jack. He nurses her back to health and Holly soon finds out Jack Frost is way hotter than she thought!

Kinks: curvy bbw erotic romance, paranormal fantasy erotica, jack frost, big girl, plus size, winter, holiday, mystery, magic, myth, fantasy romance, snow



If you would like to be added to September or this months BBW feature (October's) please email me at Veronica.r.Hardy@gmail.com and I will send you the requirements for entry. 

Giveaways and Freebies Around the Web

I'm working hard on my latest piece, Riveted: For Love of a Soldier, so I have no reviews or sneak peaks to give. Instead, I am pointing you to other sneak peaks and freebies I find.

Happy Reading!


1. Nora Nix has a Thursday Giveaway she would like to share!  This woman's works are top notch and downright sexy. I highly recommend giving her page a glance.

2. Penelope Jones is at it again, Chapter One - Free!!! Diary of a Broken Sub. It is beautiful and refreshing.

3. The Last day for Cursed Ever After - A.C. James new work. So excited to read this one.

Bonus:

4. Join my Mailing List and get a free holiday themed short! You should see it in just a couple of weeks. :)

My Rockstar's Rhythm of Lust is Sexy and Fast Paced

Overall: ★★★★☆

Rockstar's Rhythm of lust is a fast paced, sexy thriller that leaves you wanting more. More of the story and
more in the bedroom. A daredevil of a Rockstar meets a woman looking to get out of control. I found it refreshing, dark and dangerous. I don't promote having sex in any of these places in real life, but in fiction, it sure is fun to read about!!

Authors Description:

School was out for summer and I was out to celebrate with a few other teachers. Blaze, a notorious, international rockstar walked into the club where we were drinking. He came right up to our table. And right up to me.

We practically had wild sex right there on the dance floor. We did have wild sex on his way to a show. And at the show. We had the wildest sex of that night on his Harley Davidson, speeding down the dark highway.

And that was to be the start of the ride of my life.

This 6,203 words story contains very EXPLICIT scenes of sex. Public sex, outdoor sex, and some very adult varieties of sex. It is definitely unsuitable for readers under 18. 18+ only. XXX, triple-R. And not advised if you are offended by GRAPHIC descriptions of sex, or bad language.
Originality: ★★★★☆

I've seen the rockstar troupe... a lot lately. But the way Alice May Ball pulls it off is sexy, nuanced and downright scary at times. I was pretty impressed with the way she wrote.

Character Development: ★★★★☆

For the nature of the piece this they were well developed. I liked the way she had them move and interact with one another, but there were times when Blaze fell flat. We didn't know much about him, other than he was a famous rockstar. The female character is well developed, I know about her past, she feels three dimensional but Blaze feels like a dream at times. I thought overall it was well done, just missing a few of those pieces.

Editing:★★★★☆

In a couple of places the dialogue was a bit confused. It threw me a little bit, but over all it was edited well. I enjoyed reading it and I enjoyed the flow of the editing.

The Sex: ★★★★★
Yeah, this was by far the best part. Oh My God. Sex on a motorcycle. I had to find out if this was even possible. The answer is yes- if you are a psychopath. So in short, unless you are crazy like Blaze. Don't do it. You could die. But read about it, where it is safe and sexy and sinful. Read about it in Alice May Ball's Book because it is low priced at 2.99 and a very sinful read. 


Veronica Hardy is a professional editor and author who enjoys writing reviews in her spare time, for fun. She is not compensated by authors, publishers or online retail markets for her opinions. If you are interested in a book review or editing services please email her at Veronica.R.Hardy@gmail.com.

Doctor Doctor Tell Me The Reviews!

Overall: ★★★★★

Once again I am making my way back into M/M Erotica and loving it. This Medical Fantasy piece is sweet, short and exciting. I am very impressed with what Scarlet Cox puts out.

My M/M Review list is growing, just like... well. You get point.

For the meat (ahem, I can't stop myself) about this work:

With a demanding wife and trouble between the sheets, Theo Newton is finding it impossible to get an erection any more. Facing scorn at home, he seeks help from hunky Doctor Groves.

Groves' methods are unorthodox, but the British doctor knows exactly what he's doing, and he isn't willing to give up on a patient.

Can Theo find a cure, or will all the good doctor's efforts be for nothing?

Click on the pic to purchase!

EXPLICIT CONTENT: This 5,500 word short story features steamy oral and anal sex, rimming, humiliation and BDSM. Not for the faint-hearted!

Originality: ★★★★★

I loved the way it was set up. I have read medical erotica before and found it to be... less than thrilling. Scarlet manages to make it exciting, thrilling and well... hot. I think that deserves a five star originality. 

Character Development: ★★★★★

This has just enough character development that I don't want for more, I don't ask for it. I want the sex and I want it now. I was satisfied with the way the doctor and the patient were depicted. It was erotic without having any romantic strings. Something that usually is a turn off for me. But what can I say? I liked this piece. 

Editing:★★★★★

Professional editing. I am so pleased that most of the self-published authors I have read lately have been so well done. This is another example

The Sex: ★★★★★ 

OMG crazy insane, sexy. I mean seriously. I had to clench my sheets a few times while I read this in bed before sleep. My husband thought I was having a seizure. (I know, not a super sexy image, but still) because I was trying so hard not to turn a million shades of red. 

Veronica Hardy is a professional editor and author who enjoys writing reviews in her spare time, for fun. She is not compensated by authors, publishers or online retail markets for her opinions. If you are interested in a book review or editing services please email her at Veronica.R.Hardy@gmail.com.

New Release: Touchable Darkness: Demon Breeding

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Naughty Night School: I Milked My Teacher. Sneak Peak!

Available:

Sitting in night class each night tracing over my name while I ignore a raging boner throbbing against my leg isn't my idea of a great time. But it is all I can do to keep from staring at Ms. Fitzpatrick's engorged tits. She is the kind of sexy stern teacher, with thick black glasses and shirts that are always just a bit too low cut. You see, she had just come back from maternity leave to teach our segment of GED each night. Sometimes her shirt even has small wet circles around her nipples from where her milk has leaked through and I had to hold back a moan. So I looked down at my paper and traced my name "Riley O'Connor" over and over. Because I want to get through it, I want my GED.

And because I am not that kind of a guy. Really. I was a good kid in high school, I wrestled and played baseball in the fall and also was a member of the French and Chemistry club. I earned mostly A's and B's. Not your typical candidate for GED classes.


I have to endure night school, not because I dropped out due to drugs or stupidity, but because I had to take care of my mom while she went through chemo and radiation. It took two years but she finally kicked cancer's ass. So here I am, at 19, trying to concentrate the constitution and geometry proofs Monday through Friday from 6-9 with a raging hard-on because my teacher is a MILF.


About three weeks into the class we had our first big test. So I waited, with a giant smile plastered on my face the night it was due back to us, as Ms. Fitzpatrick passed out our tests. I grabbed it eagerly, sure that I aced it, as she placed it on my desk face down. F.


"I expected better, Mr. O'Connor. See me after class." She scolded sternly as she walked away.


What?! I asked myself going through the test. I knew everything. I was confident of it. So I looked at my scan-tron bubble sheet sure that I could explain this to her in some way. She had to of made a mistake. I could just explain it to the sexy vixen of a teacher, and it would all go away. Three weeks of work would be redeemed.


Except it couldn't.


I skipped one question and all of my answers were wrong off by one. I swore a blue streak in my headed and prepared a different conversation in my head while she went through the process by which congress passes a bill with the class. One were I begged for a retake.


The rest of class went too fast and before I knew it everyone was leaving while I sat in my desk waiting in shame. I wasn't prepared to advocate for myself and I knew it.


"Mr. O'Conner, please give me just a few moments and I will be right with you," Ms. Fitzpatrick requested in a polite tone before rushing through the door without waiting for my response.


Typical.


So I sat there and waited. My blood was pumping in my ears from my embarrassment. I had never failed anything before in my life. GED classes were supposed to be easy. What if I didn't pass my GED and couldn't go to college? How could I explain that to my mom? Hey mom I know you just went through two horrible years of painful vomiting, fatigue and body wracking pain and that you drew strength from wishing to see me succeed but I suck. Doomed.


After about five minutes I heard the door open and sat up straight, sweat beading on my forehead. I wanted to approach this right. She walked through the door in a completely different outfit from her pencil skirt and blue button down dress shirt. A long satin red dress replaced it. No, it was a nightgown. Without anything under it. Her breasts were perky and hard, the fabric already soaked through from what I imagined was several hours worth of milk un-pumped.


She approached me with a stern look on her face and lectured, "Riley, I am very disappointed that you did so poorly. But, I am willing to let you retest. If you show that you are worthy of it."


She bent over my desk to give me a better view of those large swollen mountains. They looked delicious. I caught myself liking my lips before stuffing my tongue back into my mouth and clearing my throat.


"Ms. Fitzpatrick, I don't think that this is a good idea. I mean someone could come in..."


Not, I don't want to have sex with someone in a position of power over me. Not, I respect you as a woman. Instead I don't want to get caught. I am so lame.


She pulled my desk away from my chair and sat on my lap, wrapping her arms around my neck. I had her full attention. All parts of me. She could feel it through my jeans against the very soft, very thin material draped over her body. But I didn't push her off or apologize for it. I let her know that I wanted her.


I had spent several nights wondering what those creamy globes looked and felt like. I even dreamed about tasting the flowing milk that seemed to be causing her so many problems. So yeah, maybe I drooled. A little.


"Mr. O'Connor, you worry too much. We are the only one's left in the old school building. I made sure of it. Besides, I couldn't wait any longer."


Taking each strap of her gown off she shoved what small fabric was covering her down, exposing her appetizing bounty. The honey soft flesh bounced slightly as it released and I found that my eyes could not leave them. I had taken the bait.


"Aren't they beautiful?"


"Yes," I whispered almost venerability, too late to take my admiration back.


Ms. Fitzpatrick grabbed her swollen breast in one hand and squeezed the plush flesh, a small amount, a dribble really, of milk emerged to drip off the tip of her hard pebble, falling down onto my shirt. I gulped visibly.

"Suckle me, I am bursting with milk." She purred at me, a command more than a request.

Inside Her Faerie Circle Now Available!

 

Allyson is just a normal college girl until she is spirited away into the land of faerie by a breathtaking trickster named Lea. The Faerie wants the girl all to herself but will have to fight a rugged elf who has his own designs on the mortal. This is the first installment of the series. Warning: This erotica contains 10,000 words of delightful scenes of titillating masturbation, manipulation and coercion as well as lesbian love and a delicious three way that includes penetration of multiple orifices.




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